以下這一篇是正在四年級的女兒的寫作
老師的評分很高, 評語是: You are a wonderful writer, Andrea.
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A Special Day
By Andrea Phillips
As I was in Taiwan I was happy that my mom was coming because I haven’t seen my mom for 3 months, and I kept on asking my Aunt in Chinese, “ Is my mom here yet?” She answered, “No! She will be here tomorrow.” I sighed. My Aunt was always really nice, but sometimes she got really mad like right now. This time she was very mad because I kept on asking her, :” Is my mom here yet?”. And that’s how she got mad at me. It was the afternoon and my mom was coming tomorrow. I slowly ate lunch when I finished it was 2:30 in the afternoon. Time past quickly and I felt sleepy. It was 5:38 so went to take a nap. I quickly fell asleep and I fell asleep. As I was sleeping I dreamed of meeting my mom. She was as smooth as a blanket and warm as an inside a persons body. I was so happy I was happier than a bee having its first sip of honey. In fact I was so happy I woke up. I looked at my clock and it was 8:25PM! I hurried down stairs to see what my Aunt was doing. She wasn’t there but my uncle was. He was watching T.V. I asked my Uncle, “Where is Auntie?” I questioned him in Chinese. “She’s buying dinner for us.” My uncle answered in Chinese. My Aunt arrived home and I helped her with the groceries to the kitchen. We were going to have fish, rice and soup together. It was great, but I still missed my mom. It was 9:30 PM and bed time so I quickly brushed my teeth, and went straight to bed. I didn’t dream about my mom because I forgot about her. I am usually a heavy sleeper on free days. My mom arrived at Taiwan at 8:30am and has to take a bus for an hour and 30 minutes. So that means she would arrive at my Aunt’s house at 10:00 a.m., well, I woke up at 10:30 and saw my mom eating breakfast and…
I SAW MY MOM!